Thursday, 20 February 2014

Descriptive Writing - Favourite Ice-Cream

We have had some amazing descriptive pieces of writing today. This piece caught many teachers attention as the author began to use similes to enhance the writing and draw parallels to something else. Students had to write a "Description of their Favourite Ice-cream".

"My favourite Ice-cream is choc chip. It tastes like mint and choc chip ice-cream and it is the best. How good? I'll tell you. It looks like it is as green as the grass, it has little bits of chocolate lollies in it and it is freezing cold" 

By Jack.

Thank you Year 2 for a very productive and positive week. Enjoy your weekend. I look forward to seeing you all and hearing about all of you wonderful adventures over the weekend on Monday.